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WOAH... That was amazing! Very intense, it was fantastic! Sorry, can't really give you much of a review. The only thing I can say like you have heard is go ...

I liked it! I am interested and want to know about the old like that makes her so sad... I couldn't find any grammar mistakes so good job there Overall ...

I really truly enjoyed and loved your story. It was a quick but extremely enjoyable read. The idea itself was very original and I like the perspective immensely. I will ...

Ahhhh! I wrote a long review with nitpicks and everything and then my Internet disconnected! Totally unfair...well anyway I LOVE this chapter and can't wait to read more. I will ...

This was really good. I am reading this kind of thing in school right now. You start off very well, you get people interested my only thing is that you ...

I laughed when you added the bit about Twilight, a good bit of humor. :lol: I like this chapter a lot. It is a bit short and I can't wait ...

Why on earth have you not continued this yet? I think it is very good and I want to know what happens! Your story line at times can be confusing ...

Wow! Okay, it took forever but I just finished reading all 6 chapters, and may I say, it was worth it! All right, first with the insane complements: I loved ...

Nice, I liked it. A little short for my taste though! :P Okay, on to the review...(sorry, I am in a nitpick mood) 8) Too bad he is kind of ...

Wow, that took forever, but I am glad that I did it. I have just completed all 13 chapters of your story. It was really good and I like it ...

Hello! Welcome! Just to tell you, as a rule we like it when you review at least two pieces before you post your own. That way we don't just have ...

Bittersweet : Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it. :) I will try to hype up the suspense a bit more and try not to make it too obvious what ...

Thanks Bittersweet! I will definitely work on everything that you pointed out. They actually do have finals, after you pointed that out I phoned one of my British friends up ...

Hey everyone, I know I just posted chapter 2 but I don't know how long my Internet was going to be up on this computer so I decided not to ...

Yay! That was so good! I loved it and I am so glad that they are together and he found out! :D I think that he should perhaps freak out ...