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Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
Uggggggghhhhh WRITER'S BLOCK I HATE YOU!!!!!!! *See siggy* I just murdered the writer's block I had a week or two ago - it was probably the WORST writer's block I ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: How long is/was your longest story?
So, how long (how many words) have gotten your longest story to be? (This might not be in the right forum, but I was just wondering how long some could ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Nevermind
Thanks for the crit, I actually wanted Hayes to be immature, I'm going to explain that more later on. Also, I have edited chapter one to be better, I'll have ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
You can't be serious. LOTF was terrible, it was extremely disturbing and just creeped me out!
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Courage's Courageous Adventure (edited)
Good job! :D But you need to seperate the paragraphs by pressing enter twice after every paragraph. (That way it's not a huge block of writing and you'll get more ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Finally Home-prelude
That was definitely very short and it's hard to edit much, so basically what Casey_kent said, say what happened to her. There's one little thing I spotted though: The number ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Finally Home- ch.1&2
Oh, Alainna beat me to it. She pretty much said everything I was thinking. All right, so, there was waaaay too much dialogue in that, try to describe things more; ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Children of Power
Great job! Excellent descriptions! :D I was a bit confused at this part though; Those of the original Revolt who couldn’t adapt to living like a thief, murderer, or all ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Devil's Inquiry
It was a good satire, but it seemed too wordy to be humorous for me. Yes, I know that it was supposed to be 1,000 words, but you said way ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
EW EW EW EW EW!!!! I hate that part! Roger sharpened a stick at both ends You know how the pigs head was on a stick sharpened at bothe ends ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: AMAZING video footage
haha you got me at first! :D
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Nate's a fool!
Ohhhhh, I missed it! :cry:
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
Mar 27, 2008 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
granted, but you get so bored with it (because no one posts anything new) that you wish you couldn't get on YWS more I wish that life wasn't so confusing
Mar 27, 2008 -
Re: Rakun, the samurai
Hey, welcome to YWS! PM me if you have any questions. I know you said "any kind of music" but what are your favorite types? Hope to see you around. ...
Mar 26, 2008