oregongirl

I liked this poem a lot! good job on description! :D ML, oregongirl

These are beautiful!! :D I loved them all! I love how you captured the flowers they're beautiful great job! :) ML, oregongirl

I really liked this poem! :D I loved how it flowed and how you described the emotions it was great! good job! :D

I love it! :D It is adorable! :) good job! ML, oregongirl

I think that you used TOO much rhyming in this poem. Try to work on that and it will be a lot better.

You really killed the poem by saying "friendship" so many times. Also I think you should work on punctuation. You put periods after every line except the last one in ...

I think you definitely over used the title. I think it was pretty good. good job! :D

I think you should add more caps I agree with kitty15. and also add a little more punctuation. good job :D

I liked this poem a lot! I think you did a really good job! :) Great job!

I think you should maybe add more. :) I didn't really get what you were trying to say. I also think maybe you shouldn't use "tinted glass" a lot. Except ...

I really liked this poem! :) The word "perfect" did bother me after awhile I agree with afterthought. but I didn't think that it was too plain at all! Great ...

Good description in this poem! I really liked this! Good job and keep it up!

ok well hello :) um there were a few mistakes in here. Um in the second paragraph the second line the 'i' should be captilized and some of the beginning ...

Hello Shawn! :) Welcome to YWS! It says that you are a new member so welcome! ok well I also want to make sure that you know that you should ...

Wow cool poem! :) I really liked this one a lot! I agree with muffin! (EnchantressMuffin) it didn't make sense in some parts but even if it wasn't supposed to ...