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This poemwas based on somebody having a crush. It was really described well. The feelings that you showed are really very good. However you could have skipped the line His ...

The poem was really good. I couldn't understand Hardwood floors... Reflecting nonsense back at my battered mind. . Otherwise the poem was really good and you used the short sentences ...

The poem was really wonderful. I really like your thought process. Its impressive. I really liked I'll grant you your final wish, Now go and meet your Maker. It made ...

This poem is more of a description. The main motive of any literary item is to make the reader feel. It should touch somebody's heart. This poem kind of fails ...

This is my first review on a short story. So please, if you do not like the review, i am sorry. It is said that the first impression is the ...

An amazingly brilliant poem. The more I say about it, the less it seems. It really is a wonderful tragic poem. The ending was kind of strange. I think you ...

Congratulations on the first poem! I must tell you it was a really good first poem. Though, i didn't get the connection between the title Murder of the mind and ...

I could'nt understand what was the message you wanted to convey. I dont think it was repitive though. I liked There's a piece of you no longer whole, That this ...

The poem was really good. Using the lines You are gone, forever gone, And here I must remain. made the poem a refreshing read. Keep it up. Merry Christmas. :)

The metaphors and similies are really good. But still:- 1 The car is on standby instead of that perhaps you could simply say the car is off or something like ...