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Glad it helped. That's why it's always good to have faithful proofreaders.

Thank you. Maybe I will try my luck, then. You are certainly good for my confidence.

Ah, condolences, then, for your word processor. But never mind the overzealous capitalization, it was well-written. I'm curious of the rest.

Hi, Ty. Thanks for the review. I was afraid you would just get sick of Russ's twisted narrative so I'm glad to see you are hooked. As for Russ's psychology, ...

Hi again. Yes, I agree, the guy is disturbing and, well, I have an idea of what's really going on with Mark, of course but I'm letting you stew. It's ...

Thanks for the review. You were a great help. I know I make tons of small mistakes but I have trouble spotting them on my own. And I have a ...

Thank you for the review. Sorry for the ever/even thing. It's a typo.

Thank you, Alliyah. Sorry about the whole/all thing: I still have trouble with that one. I have some work left to do on the dialogues so they will be clearer. ...

Hi, Ty. I will try reworking Cordello's character but I'm not entirely surprised at your comment. There are three main 'voices' in this story and Russ is definitely minor, thanks ...

Hello, Blueafrica. I knew you would just love the ranting about Nyssa's 'deceptiveness'. I kind of shocked myself when I first wrote it but it just meshed with Russ's character ...

Wow, highschool...I didn't realize you were so much younger than me. Ten years might not seem like a lot right now but I can assure you, you will be hit ...

Crushed, I'm afraid. I didn't especially want to kill Wood but it's kind of the story of Viggo's life: everything he cares about gets taken away all the time (brother, ...

Thanks for your review. I love Nyssa (I love all of my characters) but the really sad thing about her is that she grew up despising both of her parents ...

Thanks. I owe my view of science to a priest who once preached in my church. He was a very young man but very wise and I still remember him ...

Hi, I just published part 2.2 Please do read it if it's not too much trouble. I would love to hear more from you, especially since you are all caught ...