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Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Thank you for the thoughtful review! Yes, I was definitely on the fence about changing the format of "false truths spinning" after I realized how it might cause confusion. I'm ...

I see what you did there. ;)

Gosh dangit, I meant change the "to" to an "and", not the "or". This is what happens when you review poetry during class. XD And wow, I didn't know that ...

Thank you for your thoughts! I don't think my writing about poetry necessarily had a direct relationship to the target audience; it was just more of my feelings and analyzation ...

When I get to editing, I'll most likely remove them if it's distracting! Thank you so much

Thank you!

Thank you! I knew this had a lot of issues from the beginning; I just couldn't pinpoint exactly what they were. I'll get to editing this. ^^

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it had that much of an effect on you! :)

Lau- Wow, this was so much better. I love what you did with the notebook, and how you included more of Matthew's thought process! It was almost more suspenseful this ...

You're welcome! I'm glad you see this as constructive rather than disparaging. I'll keep an eye out for future works of yours. ^^

I think this might inspire you. :)

I actually agree with what you're saying. I honestly have no idea what this is about either. I could choose so many themes to focus on with the ideas I ...

Thank you! :3 I did mean to not capitalize the i's; I've been trying some new styles of poetry lately. Thanks again!

Thanks Kat! Seeing all of you guys' wonderful reviews made me smile.