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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Little Sister

    Hello! I certainly do agree with everyone else in that this is an extremely cute poem. I love how you structured the stanzas into different parts about her. One is ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Together We Conquer

    Hi there! This was a very powerful poem with an equally powerful message. I find your call to action to be very powerful and enticing. Telling people an uncomfortable truth ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: parturient

    Hi! This is a rather short poem yet I feel more potency in it than I do in a lot of longer pieces. I can feel the raw emotion within ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: pretty flowers

    Hello dear! This poem is exteremley beautiful. Even without a traditional rhyme scheme, it still seems so lyrical. The subject of flower meanings is so incredibley complex that it could ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: The Inner Ramblings of a Teenager

    Thank you so much for sharing your work with us! I really relate to this piece in that I share the doubts expressed in it and I know how it ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Starry Eyed Girl

    Hello! I'm not really sure what else to say so I'll just get to the review! I absolutely loved this poem! It just made me feel all fluffy and I ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Poem #1 -W.N.T.T.

    Hi this is my first review, so I'm sorry if it's not too helpful. I really love the rhyme scheme with this and the words you use to rhyme. In ...

    Jun 28, 2016


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner