patience_isnt

Pretty good so far. I am excited to read the rest of it when you post it. I just have a few grammar and spelling mistakes that you made. If ...

I really enjoyed the first part of Part 1. I liked how I can relate with Tibby and the relationship of herself and her mother. There were just a few ...

I totally agree with you guys about the whole reject thing. In my opinion though, ti's more fun once you hit puberty and everybody's not friends. I don't know, it ...

Okay, so I just found a few grammar mistakes. A few, so don't worry. (It helps if you type it on a Word document with the spell check on. That ...

Love it! It was well written, and a powerful message. Bravo! And I agree with tennisprincess; interviews and more direct quotes would definitely improve this alot more... but it doesn't ...

I cried. I actually cried. I am so sorry that this had to happen to you. But I understand what you're feeling too. (And no, I'm not just saying that.) ...

Again, late. But that can't be helped. I really enjoyed this essay. I can't see you getting any less than an A on this. I wouldn't change it now. I ...

I love: "Also, teenagers who get pregnant are usually put into the “slut” category" If you’re thinking of getting an abortion, just remember this: “A person is a person, no ...

I couldn't find anything wrong with it, but then again, I was really pulled into it. I was so pulled into it, I didn't realize that it was ended. xD ...

Wow, that really takes the reader in. What a great piece! I was surprised that you could write so well in second person. Most people try to write in second ...

**Alright people. This is just a draft, so don't get too harsh with me. I really need a good mark on this, so any help would be appreciated. Thanks.** Abortions: ...

Really good start. The only thing I want you to change a bit are the paragraphs where the characters are talking. Those get quite confusing. If you break them up ...

I love My Chemical Romance. All the albums. I like Fall Out Boy. Just Infinity On High. Rise Against is okay. Just the latest album. AFI is good too. Most ...

I saw this movie about a week ago, and honestly, I didn't like it. I don't think it was Harrison Ford's fault that the movie was crap, it was George ...

That was... An odd short story. The beginning wasn't realistic enough. I would recommend changing the cursing and fighting scene a bit. Maybe try remember having a fight with someone. ...