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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Ode to Mothers

    This poem is very well written, and I love the message it conveys. It made me feel really warm and loved. In terms of grammar and structure, the first two ...

    Jul 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: Have It In You

    The message of this poem is profound. It's telling the "young grasshopper" to find peace in the world and stop running. The grammar from some of the lines are incorrect. ...

    Jul 1, 2016


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites