pazey13

This is really good. I have read another of your work and I must say that you did well on both of them! This is a really good way to ...

I really liked this! The way you started it was excellent. The way you ended it was amazing. :) Although, I think you should leave out the "Well," in the ...

Wow. This is breathtaking! :) I liked the use of imagery. It was so beautiful and the lines seemed to flow together perfectly! I really enjoyed this. Keep writing. I ...

That was really confusing. Good, but confusing.

Wow. This was incredible! It was very simple, short, and to the point :) I loved it!!

I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't think it was cliche at all! :) Keep up the good work!

This is REALLY good. I can only imagine all the twists and surprises that can be packed into the story. This was a really good read and I can't WAIT ...

My name is Reilly August. I used to go to Samson Middle School. I need to hurry up and write this because people need to know the consequences of bullying. ...

This was really good and I liked the use of vocabulary! It was really descriptive and beautifully written. It sounds like something a depressed person would write. But if you ...

Not bad but I think you should make it deeper. I don't usually like poems that don't rhyme but this one isn't half bad :) Keep up the good work!

You should extend this and make it into a book!

This was really good! If it was a song on the radio, I would actually listen to it! You should put it on youtube. I would love to hear it! ...

There was lots of bleeding. LOL. It was really descriptive though and well written :)

My name is Reilly August. I used to go to Samson Middle School. I need to hurry up and write this because people need to know the consequences of bullying. ...

This is really good but I didn't really understand what was happening at the beginning. Were the two men laying upside down, letting the dog lick their faces? I was ...