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PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 7:01 pm Post subject: The Importance of Doing Well, this certainly isn't my best piece of work, but I'd like to make it better. Rip ...

Hi! I'm Peanut. Lemme review this for you; I wait and watch the clock, as the second hand stretches out towards infinity. But still I sit and wait. *sigh* ... ...

Hey! Peanut here! Lets review; unaware, we laughed, I cried, you listened. If you are going to use the commas repeatedly like that, then at least add in that. Like ...

Wow. Nice poem! Lets get to work; I guess all it took was a simple voice, A voice that turned into a million voices, And guided the world beyond its ...

Hi! Peanut here. Let us review; Post subject: Boys are whatever, friends are forevor Uh... you misspelled 'forever'... watch that. And I just want to hold you tight, and never ...

Hello! Peanut here. :) Accept the message pressed between the inkblots and move on. Could you be a little clearer with this, please? Today, new headlines will be made, the ...

And your thoughts are like claws; I always say, never start a line with 'and'. You can do without it! Tell you fall in heap Tears on the ground, Memories ...

Wow. Nice work! Yet, there is changes to be made... Can I be more than I am, If all the universe together, Is but dust to the winds of time? ...

Lets jump right in to this mystery! the man holding a tree wanted to bust some caps but the big construction worker wanted a very long nap I don't really ...

Hey, it's Peanut! I'm here to review what you have here... a poem! Yes, a poem. Kidding. I totally knew it was a poem 8) There is a magic, to ...

Hi! Peanut here. Lets take a look at this; Look at the children with tearful eyes fear within trembling souls ;long, uttered cries. You put a semi-colon at the beginning ...

Wow. That's pretty deep ;D. Allow me to review it; And written lines. Uh... I know I've said this once or twice but... please don't start lines with 'and' or ...

Hey! It's Peanut, here to review you as my 49th review! [spoiler] I'm trying to make it to 50 reviews before the end of today :D[/spoiler] It's the flame, it's ...

Hey! Peanut here! Let's go over this; in warm mellow music. Our music. I would separate this into two lines. 'Our music' seems dramatic enough to be a whole other ...

but still a continuous race, Don't ever start a line or a stanza with the words 'and' or 'but'! There are many words that can go in the place of ...