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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Schizophrenic

    okay thank you! ^.^

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Schizophrenic

    oh oh oh i'm back but i just wanna ask a question: can i add this to my notebook of poems? i sorta just have a notebook and i copy ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    awwhh thank you! I'll change it asap ^w^

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    Aww thank you! cx I'll start capitalizing and add some punctuation to the piece. THANK YOU for the tip on the formatting!

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 04:25

    As mentioned earlier, poems absolutely do not have to rhyme. In fact, most don't. Thank you for reading and reviewing though! ^.^

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 04:25

    And you for reading my work and reviewing! ^.^ Like queereleves said, poetry has many different forms. I didn't pay as much attention to rhyming as I usually do, instead, ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 04:25

    Nov 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i held onto september

    whoa dude this is just....perfect. it's an amazing short poem, i mean holy cow. the wording is great, the imagery is great. everything is great. wow. almost every line is ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i held onto september

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    yayyy, my first actual follower! c; aww, thank you for all those comments! I'm actually very very pleased and somewhat surprised at the great feedback I got about this poem. ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    aha I've been getting better at moving away from the "stereotypical rhyming." Honestly this poem was a bit of fun, and I suppose the author of the poem (well, me) ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    awww you're so nice xx thank you! c:

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    jesus. I'm so sorry. both of my grand parents (on my dad's side) died of cancer as well. thank you for the sweet comments though c:

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the rooster

    aww you guys are all so nice cx i never thought that this would get such great responses - i spent maybe fifteen minutes at most working on this, and ...

    Oct 13, 2014


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World