pengallow

First, I thought her name was Caolynn (or something like that). Or am I getting confused with something else I'm reading? The sprites flew along with her, trying to beat ...

I guess after reading this edited version, there's not much to say now (unless you want to make it longer). :) I suppose one of the only things I can ...

This is really nice, very descriptive, to the point where I was sure I was looking at a picture book and not just words. lol I also like the characterization ...

Well, I think that Sureal hit on everything that I would've commented on. So let me say that I find this story of yours very interesting. I very much like ...

First of all, why does it just cut off with "wa"? I was getting into it. :) I must say, it's an interesting concept. I haven't read something with a ...