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  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: .

    this is great great story maybe you add a bit of a back story for Jamie

    Oct 8, 2019


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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