phoenixgrl113

This is a beautiful poem. I feel this is really easy to relate to. I'd just like to point out that the 'i's should be capitalized. Other than that, it ...

Thank you for the feedback and the welcome. That last segment, wasn't supposed to be seperated, so I did go back and fix that. So for your question about 'are ...

Thanks so much for this review. I appreciate the feedback. I did go back and change what you suggested. I do tend to use too many commas, so I'm always ...

I look forward to reading it, if you do decide to continue.