pjkio03

This poem is really powerful and, like Snoink said, really subtle. It took me a minute to realize what it was about but when it did it hit hard. I ...

This is really clever! I always love to find poetry that takes interesting shapes and formats. I really like how you made characters of the animal, taxidermist, and his wife. ...

Oh my gosh I have feelings :'( That's an amazing poem. I especially liked the line "The Pond ran dry." I like the structure of the poem, and I'm glad ...

I really liked this story. I don't know that I would have much advice to give, other than to keep writing. I'm really hooked. My favorite part of the story ...

I can't even tell you how much I relate to this. Of course, after the fatigue sets in I usually get up for a little bit and walk around. It's ...

This poem is really interesting for multiple reasons. The rhyme scheme seems so simple and appealing, but the words are really dark. I also like the way you made every ...

This is a beautiful poem! Your diction is incredible and I love the way that the whole thing flows. My favorite part was probably when you described digression and wander. ...