plathonstone

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I loved this! The dark tone set is carried throughout and the one word lines really gave an effect that made the reader think. Its so short but posses detail ...

Thanks so much for your constructive feedback. I agree my poem doesn't flow here but when I wrote it as a poem I really didn't want it to, I was ...

thank you for your feedback. I totally understand where you're coming from in your last paragraph, and I would like to explain. originally this poem was not meant for anyone ...

I liked the repetition used in this poem, it made the suspense build. I think that to improve this though you should leave a little more to the reader's imagination, ...

I liked the repetition used in this poem, it made the suspense build. I think that to improve this though you should leave a little more to the reader's imagination, ...