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'ello I haven't ever seen a poem set up like this, or anything really like this actually so good job for being unique As for the actual poem it was ...

This is a great short little poem! It really kind of tells a story even though it is only two lines. I think that if you made it longer it ...

Hey Ashley sorry I'm so late. I'm usually the first here when a new chapter comes out. You should not take Veronica out, Just because she isn't a werewolf doesn't ...

Wow this was pretty good I usually don't enjoy much poetry but you kinda tell a story a very vague and general story but a story none the less.I am ...

Another great chapter by Ashley. Now we know who and what the mysterious William is and what this story will be about. I could tell that you like the William ...

Wow, for such a silly topic I'm surprised you were able to make an actual poem from it. I liked this poem because it made sense and wasn't just words ...

Even though I didn't dear cross paths with him, I could see his face. Other than this and the two things Mike B pointed out I didn't find anything that ...

I thought this was a truly great story!That is saying something because i usually hate any romantic stories. What made me like this story was that it is mysterious because ...

Well I think this is slightly funny so good job. Dont be afraid to cuss just put it as pg 13 believe me it will be better than f&*k throughout ...

The story is very historically accurate and I congratulate you on that. It was slightly wishy washy. I mean a soldier wouldn't get so excited about writing he is exhausted ...

Wow this was the best thing i have seen online in a long while. I'm really impressed with the descriptions and the story's plot itself was very creative. you should ...