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Thanks! You make me want to keep writing.

Thanks! If this is the tone that everyone likes, then I will continue to write like this.

Thanks for your thoughtful review, I really appreciated that you spent your time to post this review . It is one of the more thoughtful ones.

Thanks! I really appreciate that! If you liked this poem, I think you should check out my other poem, Never Forget-- Always Remember. Thanks again for your review!

Thanks! I really appreciate that! If you liked this poem, I think you should check out my other poem, Never Forget-- Always Remember. Thanks again for your review!

Thanks for the feedback. I just started writing and when I showed other people (off this website) this poem, they said it is remarkable for my age... I'm not bragging, ...

Hi everybody! That is my little sister reviewing me, so just ignore her...:)

This was a good start, but I think it really left us hanging. Where's the climax? I can't really figure out the conflict... is it the mom that left without ...

This was a great poem. It reminds me of the bad we often forget.

Thank you!

Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep trying! >_< %u2665