A story where everybody dies.

Please critique this, as harshly as you wish. Most of the plot is completed and any plot holes that you may find aren’t necessarily plot holes, I was simply unable to find a good way to explain them. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them, and I’d be happy to answer. This writing may seem difficult to read, and it is meant to be that way, though I am trying to improve on readability.

Prepare to ruin your first impression with my awful prologue ^^