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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Darkness

    This is so sad. It really makes me feel sorry in an appropriate way for the narrator. I am left with two questions. This could be seen as a suicide, ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: How did it feel Felipe?

    Hi! I'm pizzaroll. I just felt like taking my mind off things by browsing the poetry section, and stumbled across this piece. This poem gave me a harrowing feeling of ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    Hey, it's just another teenage person wasting her life on YWS. But hi! Not wanting to just slam down problems I noticed, I briefly skimmed through the reviews below. You ...

    Dec 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    This is a really adorable piece. I love how you added in the colors one by one, and amalgamated them well. The rhyming does seem forced at times, so perhaps ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Never Date Me I'm Bad At Feeling

    This is a gem right here. I love it. Your words are hilarious and I can relate to this so bad. I have to admit I've never drank coffee of ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: buried things

    okay you've made me cry. i am drowning my sorrows in poems and reviewing because i love them and i spend all my time reading YWS poems and it's just ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: one last card game

    oh my goodness... this kinda made me tear up. wow. you evoke strong emotions in your readers. i do have a question that i don't want to forget, and that's ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Falling Stars

    Hi! I'm your friendly neighborhood pizzaroll. :D I loved the similies and descriptions you used in your poem. I could really *feel* the imagery as if I were the one ...

    Nov 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Is that okay?

    Yes it's okay. Well, for me to feel like this, but it's not okay for you, cause I don't want anyone else feeling like that and it makes me sad ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Ana's Games

    I've been an off and on recovering and relapsing anorexic teen for over a year now... on August 19th, I was 196 lbs. Now, Sept. 7th, I'm 184 lbs. Twelve ...

    Sep 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    0₩0 dear satan why is your poetry so good and delightfully written. I LOVE this poem from start to finish. My mind is wandering but I totally agree with this ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: What we could have been

    I feel like this could be a song. A sad song. From a girl to a boy, or a boy to a girl, or whomever to whomever. There seems to ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Drum Major

    Hey there! This poem was bookmarked awhile ago, and I apologize for putting off a review. I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Forget Me

    Hello! I've had this poem bookmarked for...over a year, it seems!! I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give feedback on and give a ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: tarot doves

    Hi there, Marmalade! (Can I just off-the-bat point out that your writing is like Laurie Halse Anderson's, like you are a younger yet blossoming version of her? I really mean ...

    Apr 7, 2017


Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
— Mark Twain