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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    hello, thanks, off course all of we are the part of diversified waves but want river...greeny

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    thanks. i remember your suggestion.thanks for the review.....

    Mar 20, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Other, Other Re: Questions????????

    this is really very nice.i like it. keep writing.....

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: piano

    hello nightcrawler.prithamrittika here for a review.i like the name of the poem "piano".i like the theam of the poem and the lines. the poem is beautiful. keep writing......

    Mar 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    The poem is about nature. Through the poem I want to tell everyone about sunset.When sunset begins the sky becomes red. The clouds are looking red for the light of ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hi. Have we met?

    it's really very nice and beautiful.i like it. keep writing.........

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    Thank you for your comment. You are right. maybe I have made a mistake. The line should be "I'm wating for the colours.

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    thanks for your beautiful commant thanks for your beautiful comment

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    thank you

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh! Spring

    Thanks for the inspiration Be spring!

    Mar 14, 2015


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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