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I don't usually do reviews like this, because they are long and tedious, but I really liked this chapter, and had a lot of specific things to say, so here ...

I must confess that this is very well written and fluid. with just dialogue you manage to convay a lot of emotion, and that is a rare talent. given how ...

I liked this a lot. The way that sentences are worded gives the peice a very charming effect, and the premise is delightfully fresh. While there is nothing new under ...

wow. this was quite well done. by acknowledging the societal norm of men being soldiers as a bias that most people have, you managed to deliver an eye opening message ...

To begin with, the piece has beautiful diction and imagery. instead of just describing her hair as brown, you chose "mahogany". I was constantly impressed throughout the piece with how ...

A short and sweet opening. Several parts were somewhat confusing, but most of the peice was well done. It opens with an exciting scene, which is a good tactic for ...

If I had to use one adjective to describe this peice, I would probably go with "chilling". It was very well written, and had a refreshingly dark mood, but oftentimes ...

this was pretty well done but there were a few instances that bugged me. granted, almost all of them are probably justifiable because of plot constraints, and other complications, but ...

good opening! It does a good job at grasping the attention of the reader, and urging him to read further. I particularly liked the description, which you have always been ...

I really did like this, particularly for two main reasons. First, your command of the english language is pretty impressive, as you were using words that I seldom remeber to ...

wow. Ok, that was pretty depressing. It was pretty well done however, as it must have been difficult to write from the perspective of a young child. In this respect ...

I think this was very well done, and I certainly enjoyed reading it. I think the strongest thing about this piece is the unusual presentation. For instance, the inner debate ...

I particularly enjoyed this poem. I'm sure you can guess why. Yep, I'm a Christian too! Anyone who is a Christian or has come into contact with them will be ...

This was an enjoyable read, primarily because it was so dramatic. A lot of works can talk about combat and violence with little impact on the reader, but you managed ...

This was an interesting read, and I must say that I particularly liked the first paragraph or two. Switching on and off between the woman commenting on her and her ...