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I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. ...

Wow, just wow! This is amazing, and brutally honest. I normally don't read long poems, but once I started reading this I just couldn't stop. I can't think of anything ...

Thanks you guys, I really appreciate the reviews and kind words.

All in all I really enjoyed it. You were right, once you begin to read into it the flow sets in. The topic and the poem itself are amazing. I ...

This is absolutely interesting. I agree that it would work well as a short story. I can definitely picture the scene in my mind, so that's great. I can't think ...

I absolutely loved it! It is really interesting and gets you thinking, good job! -Liz

I love it! Nice choice of words! -Liz

I like it. I don't think I've ever been to Quizno's. Anyways, good work! -Liz

I like it. Simple, sweet, and cute. Good job! -Liz

All the errors I found have already been pointed out so I'll skip right to the good stuff. I like it! Good work! -Liz

I don't really see anything that needs to be corrected. I really like it. Keep writing! -Liz

I like it! An interesting style of poetry. :D

I like it. As short as it is, I find it interesting. It sounds like an interesting contest. Congratulations on being published! -Liz

I like it. I don't know much about monologues, but I like your writing in general. It's interesting.