pusu_kala

I'm not good in writing poetry in english, but I tried, here I go: What is it that makes us care? Maybe its that special person whom we have to ...

You still have some working on the lyrics. It was okay in sense of rhyming but You were repeating yourself abit and using the same words all over again. [quote]This ...

I really liked it! theres one sentence that really caught my eye: surrounded by people, yet all alone It was a really dramatic remark yet I'm really familiar with that ...