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Re: People Are Idiots
I don't know if this was intended as a short story or novel, but I hope you keep going with the story regardless! It was very good and I liked ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Vicissitudes--8. Tyler Again (Part 2)
The sentences flow beautifully. The imagery in this story is also very good. HOWEVER :lol: by how wet his cough sounded This is a bit... I don't know...awkward? Maybe it's ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: A pack of friends and foes
Hello! Very nicely detailed story. Here we go: I can here others I'm sure that this is just a typo, however it is hear not here . “If you don’t ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: dyfam. (chap. 3)
I really enjoyed this chapter. Your sentences flow amazingly well, and I only have two complaints, which don't even sincerely count as complaints as they are obviously typos. and when ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Found
Hello! I’m new to the site and I hope it’s okay if I critique your work. It’s a very cute story, but it gets a bit confusing in the last ...
Jun 8, 2009