rainbowcabbit

Okay! Rainbow here to support the Red Team for Review Day! :D Unfortunately I did not read any of the other chapters. However, you did an excellent job informing me ...

Alright! On to this beautiful chapter of your wonderful series. Your plot is still amazing, especially with Kyle's impatience and Lex's balck ice. However, I feel as if you got ...

Hello! I heard you wanted this reviewed. I assume you are looking for information about your plot and pacing, and not just grammar. Ok, so, your plot so far is ...

Hello! It's me, Rainbow, here to support the Red Team! You have quite an interesting story here, and I'm sad I didn't read the first two chapters. I absolutely love ...

Hello it's me! Here to support the Scarlet Swords (and Cynthia's color). Alright, so, you got a pretty good story so far. I like how realistic it is with Luc ...

Hello! Its me again to review another chapter of your amazing story! I must congratulate you on following my dialogue advice. Now your story is much easier to read. Kyle ...

Oh my gosh, amazing ending you got there! Again, you have an amazing chapter. I love how realistically you made this chapter, with Lex almost killing himself and missing his ...

Hello! Its me again! I am really glad I read this chapter. Like I mentioned before, you are great at writing. You have excellent diction, to the point where I ...

Hello! Nice story you got here, shame I didn't read the other two chapters, but its better than not reviewing any. From what I have seen, you have perfect work! ...

Hello! I believe I read some of this wonderful story before. XD I shouldve read chapter two though. Your story is still great, but I am quite curious as to ...

Hello there! So this is an English assignment? I hope I can help. Well, I love all the imagery you put in here, it's almost like I'm there! I also ...

A dark gray, almost black wolf prods forwards and looks up at you kindly. "Hello," she says. I love your poem alot! Its quite interesting how you think. I love ...

Oh my goodness I am dying with laughter at that ending. XD I should have probably read the first chapter of this, oh well. For what I've read you have ...

What a remarkable story you've got here! The plot you have looks pretty interesting, and your characters seem quite developed. I will try to remember to read more of your ...

This is a fanfiction? I didn't know. Regardless I am here to review this beautiful piece. First of all, I find it wonderful how the main character is blind and ...