rainbowcabbit

First review in a while! I am so happy I ran into a this story, I was dying to read a horror story. Anyways, to the point. Everything here looks ...

Hello, Rainbow Cabbit here! Merciless, you say? Don't worry, I am obsessed with prologues in a way. Overall, this is a pretty good story. You put good imagery with the ...

Alright, Rainbow Cabbit here for another review! First of all, your story is still amazing. Again, I love how you try to make things realistic. The way you describe the ...

Hey! Rainbow Cabbit here to review your lovely story. Your story was great, and I absolutely loved the cliffhanger at the end. Also, I found how you made Donna really ...

OK. So the imagery in the beginning of your story was awesome. I also like the plot. It's realistic and it puts cliche to a whole new setting. However, when ...

I have no idea what this is from, and I haven't read any of the other chapters, but I like this chapter. You have real good tone and voice. I ...

Oh my goodness? Did that really happen to you? If so, I'm sorry to hear that. Even so, it is a very interesting short story. You really express the confusion ...

Hey! Rainbow Cabbit here to review your work! Oh, and by the way, welcome to YWS (the Greenroom told me you are new). I really love the whole doll idea ...

Hello! I really like your story so far. I like how you fully described the scene of near death and the commotion between the wolves. I also love how the ...

Hello! Rainbow Cabbit here! This is a rather interesting story. I love the development of the characters in the story. You did a really great job with Mason and Elijah. ...

Ok, Rainbowcabbit once again here for review day! So, I really loved your story. Your characters are amazingly developed. I was amused at Darius's horrible and immature behavior and loved ...

Hey :D So you finally joined! Well welcome to YWS. One, I like the plot and how you made the civilization so casually there. Unfortunately, I think you should add ...

This sounds interesting. I actually had an idea once similar to this XD ironically. Your prologue is amazing: I love how you ended it with a threat from the sister. ...

Ok, so you wanted me to review your piece. XD I ain't gonna argue with that! Free points! First, I like the humor and emotion of the story a lot. ...

I wish I could write such long and helpful reviews as my buddy Hannah...but anyways, I do like this piece. Yes, its fictional, but the strong diction and content really ...