rainbowcabbit

I wanted to hint at the video game theme. But thank you! :D

Thank you. It's not pokemon fanfiction, but I was hoping to give the ideals of Pokemon. :3

I meant to make the tower game-like, that's how they heal fast. I'm sorry ):

Thank you :)

It worked. ;D

You told us about why the king wanted to go after the man (because he rebelled) and you already told us the names. Personally, I wouldn't tell the reader why ...

Thank you :3 I want to explain the Keys more later. Throughout the story you'll eventually understand, or so I hope.

OK, XD I couldn't think of anything better (Whoops) than vibrator (I don't even think my mins was in the gutter when I wrote this). "Shadow King" was Ky's silly ...

Thanks :D

Very interesting poem indeed. I love how you convey the image of death. Your imagery is amazing. Your words are definatly powerful and leave the reader feeling the emotion. Your ...

Wait, I just realized this wasn't a true story. Whoops.

Guys was probably a typo. Whoops. Funny things happen when I type, sorry. Plus, some parts are just really hard to describe. Thank you and good luck :D

Thank you so much. Good luck with your reviews. :D

This is truly amazing. There is nothing else I can say here but keep up the good work. :D

Thank you :)