raphael

Hello, just to say that I liked this version a lot more than the previous one, it was more exciting and less... cheesy. I liked the start, especially the bit ...

I liked this, although I agree with some other reviewers about the 'aye' and walking the plank clichés. I also thought the exclamation marks sort of spoilt the flow a ...

I loved this! This was easily the best - and most bizarre - story that I've read on this site so far... Did you completely make up all of the ...