ratdragoon

You caught me with the thesaurus thing, that's a bit of a habit of mine... The historic accuracy worried me.. I based most of my research on wikipedia (I can ...

I thought the end was slightly rushed and abrupt, I'm not sure if you wanted the reader to feel that way but I was expecting more and was surprised when ...

Oooh sorry I didn't realise, do you already have some posted here? there is part one... but shoudln't a link appear near the top of the page, under "possibly related ...

Uh, this IS part of a novel...

OMG it does :O, but don't tell anyone! thanks for the positive responses!

The repeat paragraph is a typo, sorry bout that... The title is in caps because it's an abbreviation, of which more will be learnt further on, but I'll change it ...