raynaleanne

That was great, different from the last chapter, but it has more detail of the characters. I liked that you showed that this Mr. Cooper isn't only an author, but ...

A candy apple blue corvette? Wouldn't that be red? Anyway the story was intrigueing. I like how you are an author and writing a story about a struggling author. I ...

I liked the story Bre, it was good. Although I would have to agree with the mod person that the repetition of the chasing doesn't really do very much for ...

You need to make it all more clear. At first it seemed more like she was a human detective and then you see her looking back into her file where ...