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Raabia Tabassum

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Can you suggest me ways to correct that line?

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Thank Uh! :)

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Thaaank You So Much :)

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Morning Breeze

    Thank You So Much! :)

    Oct 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thanks! I will work on it.

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thank You. Yeah. I'll work on that.

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Whir of A Sober Girl

    Thank Uh! :)

    Sep 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Artificial Love

    Try twisting the words here and there for a better flow but I think it sounds good the way you have written it too.

    Sep 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thank You So Much! :)

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    You write so well. No, it was smooth. I didn't find the rush in this. GREAT! You are really creative. Keep writing. I really liked the last part "“You guys ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited}

    Woah! You really are magnificent at writing! Sorry, lost the thing for writing reviews so take this as a compliment. KEEP WRITING!

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Had It Coming

    Such a touching poem. Love it Keep writing!

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Lacuna

    Woah! Such an amazing and touching poem. I love these lines "You speak, and I melt, craving to hear you speak again, Laugh, and suddenly I can’t focus," I can't ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: What The Heck?? Chapter 1

    Thanks

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Antagonism & Howitzers & Egomania To Blood

    Thanks So Much. :)

    Jul 8, 2014


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes