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I have a question. Do you think this story is good? Do you think If i send it for publishing will it b accepted?

Yes IT DID! THNK U :)

Thnk u sO mUCH!

Could u suggest me how to describe that part? and bout Eliza she believes her cuz she has no other choice. but if u mind suggesting It be really helpful

Thanks. Where shud i adjust the school name but?

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I want to but I dont have time thats why. Hope that helped :)

By brother killing brother I meant.. everyone is killing themselves. Thanks

By this line "Including Earth; excluding the planets along with Mars." I meant earth is the only planet having wars. By the line "every house a mother" Meant from almost ...

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I do admit I made mistakes in the poem and I thank you for pointing those out but you have pointed out in a mean way. Thats what I meant. ...

Could u suggest me how to change it?