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Thanks!

Thanks :D

Thnks and i did not mean Yws stories I meant real story books in life.

I have seen in a lot of story books that quotation marks are not used and apostrophes are used. Why>

Review the other chapters too. :)

Thanks .. Story written when I was not 15 but posting it now. Do Review My Stuff More. Thanxk

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Thanks for pointing the mistakes.

I typed in Ms word only and then copied and pasted it here. Thanks. I feel lazy to change and add more stuff to my story cause I have more ...

I wrote this many months back but now I am submitting it. So yeah it may sound kiddish. N yeah thnkz

Ok thanks for pointing out the mistakes. It is not looking horror cause this are just the 5 chapters. When you get to read the final chapter you will understand ...

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I have already written the entire story. Just need to type the next five chapters and post it. Yeah Thanks For The Advice I Will Try And Change It.

I am sorry I cant mail you. Why don't you post the errors in a lot of comments? I mean don't post everything in one comment. That would take a ...

Could you please point out the punctuation marks which are unnecessary?