recreating

I absolutely adored your beginning. I love beginnings that just make you want to keep reading, and you have "nailed" it. I enjoyed the style of the writing. It had ...

I love it. It is a very sweet poem. The rhymes are very good. I still, of course, do have notes. *You've inspired me. *You have changed my life *But ...

You have a very strong introduction, which is always a good thing. It is a very good attention grabber, which is something that i always enjoy. I do, however, still ...

This is amazing. I loved the attention grabbing quality of it. I was very interested from the very beginning, which is always something that i enjoy. I also love the ...

I enjoyed the liveliness of it all. It had so much personality. As a reader, i really got a good sense of who the main character was. I do however, ...

This was a very enjoyable story. I enjoyed the format. Even though i did enjoy the format, i found it to cause some issues, in my opinion. This is only ...

I very much enjoyed this story. Overall, it was very good. This is just my personal opinion, but i think that it was slightly vague. It wasn't at all confusing, ...