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Re: Garbage machina
I loved how you took the time to explain what your thought process was, I really appreciate it! This was so interesting, you brought attention to me some things that ...
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Re: The Stone Man and the Woman Blob
Thank you so much, BrownMatter! I'm really glad that you liked this poem. I'm really proud of it!
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Re: anthill
This is so interesting! I thought that you using amaranth as your plant of choice extremely fitting because of its nickname, which I'm sure you know about. I wonder what ...
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Re: A True Son of Adam
Thank you for this feedback, WinnyWriter! This was my first time trying this and I knew that I made some mistakes, but I wasn't sure where. I appreciate you telling ...
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Re: Flower Shot
Thank you for the thorough feedback, Omni! I agree with what you've written for me and I'll make sure to incorporate it in the future. I have a tendency to ...
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Re: Quotidian
Thank you for your response, orion625! I realized that I didn't want to follow a rhyme scheme any longer, so I probably should have adjusted the first stanza accordingly... I ...
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Re: Flower Shot
Thank you so much for the feedback, orion625! I really appreciate the thoroughness of your review. I will definitely keep this in mind for next time!
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Re: Quotidian
Hey, Bella! Thank you so much for your comment! I guess I would call the structure of my poem free-verse, unless there's a better term that I'm not aware of. ...
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Re: Unga
I feel this on many levels.
May 4, 2025