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Hey, Sokka! I had to. Overall, this came off as a strong dramatic action scene due to the focus, budding sense of character, and pacing, but suffers where the prose ...

BOY OH BOY DID YOU FIND A PET PEEVE. On the internet in general it's amazingly easy to find dumb people, and looking into topics like this makes it all ...

Hello! Is English not your first language? I could not tell from your profile. The first thing that jumps out is the punctuation here. I suspect this is because the ...

I need to preface this review with an apology. There is a conversation to be had around this poem around femininity and self-image, one which I will try to address, ...

Hello! To begin with, I am glad to have had the context that this is about a dead cat. Knowing this does not lessen the impact of the poem, but ...

Hello! In my opinion, this poem weaves together the chemistry motif with emotion to good effect. I really appreciate how almost every line here is making use of both themes ...

Hello! I had to review this as, in fact, I love cabbage moths. Not butterflies, the moths, which made the lines about moths being discarded like pests humorous. It is ...

This work has a clear environmentalist message. The first two verses are composed of poetic language and the stereotypical image of the wolf. The imagery there is clear in what ...

Warning to readers: do not read while drinking. I choked at the 'Shawn Mendes' one. The middle school flashbacks came fast and hard, in all its former glory. Ah, to ...

Heya! Phew. Powerful topic. Then again, it's hard to do suicide and make it light. The themes you were aiming through did shine through. I didn't pick up on sexuality, ...

Hello! My first impression from reading that this must be a partner piece to a story that the author had written. Based on your other work, this appears to be ...

Hey! I truly do like the underlying idea here. 'Monochrome' is a fun word to begin with, and using it as a running metaphor I think is a powerful visual ...

Hello! The first things I pick up from this are the narrator's (this reads like a personal piece, written out of frustration, so the narrator I must assume is you) ...

Hello hello! As a Shakespeare fan, the first thing I notice and enjoy is the running Romeo and Juliet allegory. I don't read any of it as literal (it's Juliet's ...

Based on the debate below, I should like to begin with a small lesson on the haiku. The poem structure of the haiku is complicated by the fact that Japanese ...