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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Remember She Once was Innocent

    I like it, but the flow isnt very good, i agree with the person above me, it is awkward in places but i like it(:

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You.

    this is soooooooooo sweet, someones awfully lucky and whoever you wrote it for you must love them alot(: i loooove it

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: crying on the cross

    Thank you, and yeah I'm not the best speller(: haha, but I'm glad you were moved and that you both loved the poem. It means alot to me. Thank you ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pain Is The Only Thing She Swallows.

    I relate to this poem. I softend when I read it.... It's good.

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted

    Wow. Your really good. This is just... fantastic:D! Why have you guys grown apart? Hah! Shoooot! This could be a durnnn story!

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Perfect Rain

    This poem is really .. beautiful. It seems like you find comfort and serenity in the rain. I like that. The rain restores and renews things.

    Nov 3, 2010


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown