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I have a jar of butterflies. Would you like to come and see? My favourite is the blue one with the green pattern on his wings. I love the way ...

Hello, This is a very complex poem. It is very three dimensional. The time jumps a lot I think so I was lost in places. Honestly, I am not sure ...

Hello, Let me just get something out of my system. . . awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is an incredibly sweet poem, I liked it a lot. the too-white moon This is an ...

Hey Y'all, I have decided that I feel your poems are very much in the style of the Victorian era. You used some archaic terms in my opinion, but I ...

Hello, This is an okay poem. I liked what you're going for with the piece but i lacked depth I thought. As it stands the piece is very two dimensional, ...

Hello :) This is strange piece. It jumps alot and is very dream life. It is not something you read every day and I rather liked it. My main annoyance ...

"Troops, brace yourself!" Captain - shouted. He was stood at the front of the boat as we approached the sure. The salt whipped at the side of the boat clawing ...

It's all yours

Hello :) This is a perfect title for a poem. It sums up all my emotions in one. What I expected from this poem I did not get but yet ...

Hello :) I get the poem and I like what you are trying to stay. I liked your first line a lot and I think it is a very good ...

Thank you for the comments. Jagged- I realise that my poem does not a hook. I think this is probably due to the fact that in my mind it has ...

I am a fish. Small and insignificant. I live in this pond, nay this ocean. I am pale blue with grey stripes. I am part of school, but yet no ...

Sorry the fire element has already been claimed. But please choose another.

you're in and a spot has been reserved

Yep your in and thanks for pointing out the looks part :D