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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: photosynthesis

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    Wow, this is a wonderful poem! The rhyming scheme is amazing, by the way, I love your username. Anyway, you can ignore what I’m about to point out if you ...

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Art » Other, Other Re: Masjid Hamzah

    Wow, nice poem, though you could have removed the removed the repeated sentence at this particular line I miss my masjid hamzah Shadow was the cat's name, I miss my ...

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: there is no failure without 'i'

    I didn’t understand this at all, I was not able to understand it AT ALL, I never am good at reading this type of things. Can you explain?

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Hiiiii. I’m new, and so here’s a little something to get to know me...

    Hi! Welcome baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! I can’t wait to read your work! And, I would love if you give me some tips on writing better, as I really want to write a ...

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: Destiny

    I liked it a lot, you chose to write about a very interesting topic, and the rhyming is perfect! It could’ve been a bit longer (hope this isn’t offensive) and, ...

    Oct 1, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Sorry, I didn%u2019t mean to send 2 replies

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Well, in the poem, the nerd isn%u2019t just shunning the people who aren%u2019t, but instead, facing the bullies who bully the nerd. And, you were absolutely correct about not losing ...

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Well, in the poem, the nerd isn%u2019t just shunning the people who aren%u2019t, but instead, facing the bullies who bully the nerd. And, you were absolutely correct about not losing ...

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Thank you so much! I will edit it, thank you! :)

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Thank you so much! And, when I was writing, I did have a doubt in that line, but I felt it was much better then- I%u2019m the best, special, even ...

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    This should be in the poems section, but it did not show other options except for art,

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Medieval Story

    Hi! This poem is wonderful, I really enjoy fantasy, poems and stories, The flow was amazing, and I look forward to more of these type of poems

    Sep 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Next Door

    Is this a real story? ‘Cause you sent this in the blog too. But it’s really spooky, it was very strange....... I felt goosebumps too when I finished reading this.... ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Paronoia

    I love the message this poem is giving, but I think you missed an extra ‘o’ in the word ‘to’ . I look forward to more poems, keep writing! ( ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Perfection

    Another one of the hilarious poems with unexpected endings! I really like the rhyming schemes.

    Sep 20, 2020


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings