ridersofdamar

this is pretty interesting, but I have a couple of questions. Were you planning on fixing it up and maybe expanding it into a complete story or just looking for ...

So I just read over the last two reviews, and I think they covered pretty much everything. One thing that confused me was the names. You threw to much at ...

Well, this is a very nice start for a first story. I'm not sure if you were serious about english not being your first language, but if you were, then ...

i am tired and it is late, so i didnt read the other crits. so forgive me for any spelling mistakes on my part or any repititions i might make. ...

i seem to be a little late in my review... but oh well. at first glance it seems oddly generic with the elves and the odd names and all, but ...

this was actually very good for a ten year old. I wont go into a very in depth review because it is midnight at my house and I'm very tired, ...

hey, its eli, glad you finally made an acount. 1. whoever has NOT read the zombie survival guie will die whenthe infection reaches us. I have read and will be ...

it was pretty good, a couple of things were wierd to me. You were using alot of similes in the beginning and it didnt flow very well. but that might ...

Chapter Three- Koreth As imposing and heavy as it is, that door must be made of some really cheap wood if I can stab through it, but I can, and ...