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Well, AngerManagement seems to have got all the grammar niggles, so I won't repeat that. I think you need to be a little more original with some of the aspects ...

That T-Shirt is one of the coolest things I have ever seen in my life, I want one. Seriously, you have talent, you could make some sort of business out ...

I found a picture that I love, but it's on someone's blog thing, and there aren't any contact details. My novel is called 'The War of the White Rose' I ...

40,025! Wahey! I might just get this done... o___O weird, huh?

Arg, I hate myself. I'm 4.5k behind. I guess, in comparison to others, it's not too bad. However! I think this is probably a slippery slope from which I cannot ...

Roon here! Nitpicks first! We all give excuses to live as one humanity...

Wow, I thought I was doing well with 2212... Well done! ~ Roon

I think Lucas is a good suggestion for the first, maybe Jarred, or something like that for the second. The fairly harsh 'J' sound should definitely start the name, I ...

Hello, Roon here! First off, can I say, I really loved this. There’s something that poetry needs, that’s totally indescribable, but this has it. NITPICKS: Silence in her silhouette scorches ...

Pudding! Okay, this took far too long, and I’m very sorry. I won’t explain, I won’t bore you with the details of my life during a review. I. NITPICKS It's ...

I'm Roonytoon, thought I'd be a bit different... :/

Hello, Roon here! This caught my eye, and I think that, with a bit of work, it could be incredible. I. NITPICKS Nights shadow slowly fades away

Hello, Roon here, welcome to YWS, I’m going to start with nitpicks and move onto the overall view of the poem. There backs have wings,

Hello, Roon here! Your poem really caught my eye, so well done on hooking the reader from the off. I admit, I was expecting to find something I would hate ...

Hi, if it's not too much trouble, I'd like some help with this: Also, I really need name suggestions. If you're busy then don't worry about it :) ~ Roon