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I love that the haiku made you think of all these questions! That's awesome, in the literal sense of the word, hah. Thanks a ton for your praise of the ...

Thanks so much - it's always good to find someone else who can relate. I'm so glad you loved this piece!

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hah, thank you :) I'm really really happy you enjoyed it and that it made you think - I love it when my pieces have the ability to make someone ...

Awko taco I'm talking about the first line as being one syllable over "no-a-mount-of-black-ink" as being six when it should be five, heh :) And of course, you're welcome! If ...

Thank you! You're incredibly kind to say so, and I may definitely be hitting you up to review some of my other poetry sometime in the future ;)

Thanks so much! It's always good to find a fellow lover of haikus, they're so simple and yet they can behold so much meaning behind them! I'm really glad you ...

It's okay, I do that all the time by mistake :) Thanks so much!

I meant it to be pronounced as one syllable, which does make the second line 7 syllables, heh. "If-all-of-the-shout-ing-stopped" is 7 syllables (: But thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks so much for your review: I completely understand what you're saying about elaborating more, and I definitely would, except that I wrote this piece as a haiku as you'll ...

Thanks so much - I'm glad you liked it and found it effective (:

I'm really happy you were able to feel the connection! The character in this particular poem is not me, but rather one of my close friends.

Thanks for pointing out my mistake on "harm's"! It's been fixed now (: I'm really glad that you understood the poem and you were able to connect with the piece ...

Thanks so much! I changed the bathroom line, like you suggested - you're right, it does flow much better in the newer way now, thanks for pointing that out! I'm ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!