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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Down the Shower Drain

    This review means so much to me, thank you for saying all this. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this and that you understood the flow of the poem and ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Down the Shower Drain

    Thank you so much. This piece is incredibly emotional for me, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I totally get what you mean by saying that "dirty" ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Reading is My Remedy

    Hmm, I definitely see what you mean that it ends very quickly (it being two stanzas and all, heh). I am still considering this piece to be unfinished, I just ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Reading is My Remedy

    Thank you for saying so - I do see what you mean about the second verse, and I've been staring at it since trying to figure out rewording. Well, my ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Reading is My Remedy

    I switched the second line of the poem to "the mystic cure to all my woes." It flows much better, just like you suggested - thank you for pointing it ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Reading is My Remedy

    Thanks so much for reviewing the poem! I've switched the second line to saying "the mystic cure to all my woes" rather than "the mystic cure-all to my woes" as ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Reading is My Remedy

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem (:

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sounds are Colors

    Well, I'm really glad you liked the piece, first off! For the stanza in question...when I wrote the piece (and I always consider my work to be in revision because ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sounds are Colors

    Thank you so much! You're kind to say so (:

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sounds are Colors

    Thank you so much...I'm actually incredibly grateful that you went back and read it three times to fully understand, that just means a lot to me that you were willing ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sounds are Colors

    Thank you so much. That honestly means so much to me that you liked it!

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Am I Writer

    Wow! This is pretty incredible. I could never do a Palindrome poem no matter how hard I try so I commend you on being able to accomplish this. I think ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Jester

    Wow...I love this! This is great, I don't think I'd change or critique a single thing. Wonderful :) I'd like to see more from you!! Keep writing

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: 14 Songs Chapter Three

    Thanks yeah :) I'll keep it in mind for the rest of the chapters that I proof before posting

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hands Touch

    Aw thanks Snickers! I'm really glad you liked it so much!! :)

    Jan 25, 2011


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