rubberduck

Hey there. Just thought I'd say, great job! :) There was a typo here... I loved her greatly, and I never wanted ehat we had to end. I loved her ...

Drowning in a love sea? Interesting... :) (I still don't get why people are so good at writing poems while I'm HORRIBLE at it. I'll post one and you can ...

Aww man. Major bummer for your MC. A guy she likes, likes her best friend. (Who she loves the least, but is still her best friend.) I'd never like to ...

This was good. I really enjoyed reading it. Letting it go... Something some of us can't do. It's a real issue for some teens as well. Not being able to ...

This was really sad. It really shows how cancer affects all of us. Not only the patient. Great work! :) Really. Almost moved me to tears. I lost my grandfather ...

Aww... I wanna read more.:) Anyway... As lyrical_sunshine has pointed out... Please, PLEASE no Mystical Lake! Give it a better name! :S It sounds so... Erm... I can't find a ...

I loved this! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hate cliffhangers! ;) Sarah kinda believed Chester a tad bit too quickly. It was too sudden. One moment ...

I'd love to read the next part! :) I know it's probably not my place to say this but, maybe you should describe the mansion a bit more. Describing helps ...

change the characters, change the setting, change the events and there you willhave your own story. Well, I agree with budding writer. :) Be more original. Make your own story. ...

Great story! And good job! :) An interesting ending to an interesting story.:)

Suddenly something came into view of the Camera. Suddenly it looked at the camera and with a flick of it's fingers, the battery on the camera suddenly emptied and finally ...

Nice story. :) Work on your paragraphs though. I got a little lost reading it at first. The words looked like they were bunched together. (or maybe it was just ...