runawaylove

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! First off, the simple rhyme scheme and short length of the poem drew me. I really love the fact that you rhyme. Many ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! First of all this poem shows that you are a writer with a lot of potential. This poem is ofcourse simple, but it ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! This poem has a romantic feel to it and I like that. The theme was great and the poem flowed perfectly. My favourite ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! First off, WOW. That was beautiful. This poem has a tone of mystery and it goes well with the rhyme scheme. I generally ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! First off, this poem is relatable. I like the theme.I like the message you tried to convey. My favourite line is: "Stupid, underaged, ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem! First off, I was shit when I started out. I didn't use a rhyme scheme or even stanzas. I'm fourteen now :P And ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review! :) First off, this poem has a lot of potential. A good poet expresses a typical idea in a unique way. Yes, this poem needs ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! Now, This poem is just awesome. The descriptions are amazing. I really like the way you portrayed the fact that everything comes with ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your story. First of all this story is really well-written. I like your style of writing. Alice's character is interesting as she is so naive ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! Welcome to YWS newbie :) First of all this poem is written beautifully and it makes me feel nostalgic. I really like all ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem.... Again :P First off I really like the idea and the theme. The poem flows perfectly but the rhymings seem a bit forced. ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! :) First off, I like your username and I also really liked the movie Black Water. Now this poem is lovely and hats ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! :) The thought is nice and I really liked it. It would be better if there was a bit more to it. As ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! First thing this is a very short poem. I like long poems with many stanzas but this one is really great. The length ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! This is a very nice poem. I love he thought behind it. I personally prefer poems that rhyme but this one is just ...