sailortales

Really good story! I was hoked from the start. But somethings, were a little, off. Like to much blushing, blushing should be a secret weapon that you only use every ...

First of all this was amazing! It was deep, pretty, nicely done, well looked over. When you said "Bitch" it caught me of guard, I know that sometimes cuss words ...

Amazing work! I felt as if i were in the story with the characters, that's a hard feeling to give your readers! It was very realistic. I would try using ...

This was very good. I was hoked from the first words. I was hoping we would get to see what was in the journal and what the issues were. But ...