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sarahjane97

  • Art & Photography Re: Manga Drawing

    Wow, I am envious of your eye-drawing capabilities!! They look fantastic! :)

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    Yes I am! :) I've been working on my novel Live Ten for over a year now and I've finished it. Now I'm just going back and editing each chapter ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Live Ten (Prologue & Chapter One)

    I know this is a long chapter, but I would really appreciate it if you read and reviewed this! I've been working on this book for over a year now ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Carry Me Home Novel Cover

    Very nice! However, I must agree with the others...this piece needs more color. I also think that the font is a bit bland, but that could just be me. The ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Apocalypse

    This is a really interesting perspective. :) However, as another reviewer already said, this should be a little more suspensful and exciting. When the girl confronted the zombie in the ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Random Pics I took

    These are great! My favorite one was the first photograph of the pink flower--so colorful and vibrant! I like the other ones too, but I wish they were taken in ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime doodles

    I really like these a lot! :) My favorites are the second and the third drawings! It seemed to me that the proportions in the first one were a little ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Can't Win

    Sad but beautiful. Good job. :)

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Martha

    This is a very touching peice. I never knew Martha, but from what I've heard she seemed like a very sweet and kind person.

    Jun 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Pokemon with Adrian

    My theme was a house cleaner (cleaning lady) in a mental institution playing video games. The mop slid across the tiles, back and forth, back and forth. I paused to ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One

    Hey Michael!!! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this! I couldn't find your story for awhile (I've been on this site for three weeks and I still can't ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Anymore

    Hey!!! I liked this a lot! You must have done a good job of balancing the mood in this song, because even though the subject matter was sad, it didn't ...

    May 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode To Zombies [contest entry]

    LOVED this poem!!! The subject matter was very different, which I appreciated. Also, your title was hooked me in as soon as I read it! (: Amazing job! P.S.--The twist ...

    May 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1

    I liked this A LOT. For one thing, it was very refreshing. A lot of writing here is intensely descriptive and metaphor heavy, so it was nice to read something ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Puppeteer

    I am Fear. I’m the mastermind behind the nightmares. I’m the reason society will fall. I’m the driving force of human conflict, and the foothold of a dictator. I pull ...

    May 17, 2011


The most important thing is to preserve the world we live in. Unless people understand and learn about our world, habitats, and animals, they won't understand that if we don't protect those habitats, we'll eventually destroy ourselves.
— Jack Hanna