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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Monster

    I will echo Curious to emphasize its importance: Make more paragraphs. It'll be more pleasing to the eye, more approachable to your readers (garnering more readers, which is always good), ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Say

    Rule Number 1: proofread. When you think you're done, reread what you've written, and don't get caught up in the story. Look at the words and make sure they say ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: TYWC Refugees... Bad News

    Robby, you were a crazy kid and worth every minute I chatted or argued with you (and then some). I don't know what brought me here in the middle of ...

    Jan 12, 2010


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes